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The bed sheets of fear have wrapped themselves around me. I fight with them, trying my best to get free, but they are stronger than my fragile, destroyed, body. I'm ...

I liked the poem. The only thing i saw that bugged me was that in the last two lines you stopped the rhyming which kind of throws it off. Good ...

Very well written. I love how you put spanish into it, though it was kind of weird to add it in the middle like you did. I like the title ...

Let me say first, good job. I think it is nicely written. The only part i didn't get was: Say the floor is made of marble. Just like mer i ...

Tossing and turning throughout the night I listen to the nearby train Who cries out in the lonely night For company, The hum of the TV, Trying my best to ...

Yay it's back!!!

Yeah i know. I saw that.

TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY!!! YAY!

I'm sure they will.

Thanks guys. I'll look into the books and plays and see if anything sparks my attention. if you think of anything else please let me know.

It can be anything from something written to a movie just something really funny.

Something that's already been written...

Okay here's the deal, I have to present something funny to my creative writing class. I need a bio of the person who wrote it too. If you have anything ...

I enjoyed reading it and yes it does need work. I didnt particurally (can't spell) like the lines: to drown and breathe and drown and then to swim your own ...

I liked the poem. The only thing i see wrong is you didn't use any punctuation. Rhyming poems aren't really my thing but i think you did really well on ...